网友作文五:As the director board agreed to move toward a merger between our company and Mason, [1] the name of company will be changed. The new name MasonGolding become effective from next month[2].Please be noticed.
名师点评:[1]好罗嗦的原因啊,董事会的决定你就不用提了。
[2]太长的时间,也太不具体。
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