网友作文四：Memo
From:Sonia
To:All staff
Date:29 september 2008
Re:The changed[1] name of our company
As our company has merged with one of our competiter,[2]the name of our company has changed[3] into MasonGolding. All the staff should use our new name since 1 October, and we can only use the new name after that day
If you have any question, please connect us. [4]
Thank you!
名师点评：[1]过去分词作定语或状语都是表示已经结束的动作，如果名字已经改完，就不用有这封memo 了。
[2]改为介词短语after the merger,
[3]时态错误，完成时表示已经了，应该是将来时。
[4]去掉，名字问题毋庸置疑，没有商量。
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