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“害死人”的托福写作开头 看你还敢不敢这样写

Source: 互联网    2014-07-08  我要投稿   论坛   Favorite  

  “害死人”托福写作开头之一:过分简单没有重点(喷血指数:☆☆)

  典型失败案例:Topic-The importance of environmental protection

  This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

  “害死人”托福写作开头之二:用词不当 表达不准 (喷血指数:☆☆)

  典型失败案例:Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

  I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family。

  “害死人”托福写作开头之三:意思重复原步(喷血指数:☆☆☆)

  典型失败案例:Topic-Your opinion on DINK families

  My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society。

  “害死人”托福写作开头之四:中国俗语胡乱翻译(喷血指数:☆☆☆☆☆)

  典型失败案例:Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?

  I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”

  正确说法:Happiness lies in having many children

  Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?

  We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know, don’t know is don’t know”

  Topic 3- Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?

  Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole

  以上就是托福写作禁忌,绝对不可出现的托福写作开头的介绍。这些错误大家要十分注意,经常会出现在我们的托福写作中,希望同学们对于这个进行了解。“”


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