Best to study at Home or School – SCHOOL
I. Essay Topic:In the future, students may have the choice of
studying at home by using technology such as computers or television or of
studying at traditional schools. Which would you prefer? Use reasons and specific details to explain your choice.
Different people have different views on how to
study. In my point of view,
studying in traditional schools is as significant as, if not more, than
studying at home using technology such as computers or television. So it is sensible to
study at traditional schools. (So it is sensible to
study in traditional schools.)
The argument for this view goes as follows. First, conventional school education provides you good opportunities to make friends and to develop your social skills. (First, conventional school education provides you with good opportunities to make friends and develop your social skills.) (1)
studying in schools lets you be sufficiently prepared before you go into the society. (
studying in schools lets you become sufficiently prepared before you enter society.) (“enter society”) (A) The team spirit cultivates through collective ability that can not be achieved by
studying at home. (The team spirit that is cultivated at school through student cooperation cannot be achieved through
studying at home.)
Second,
studying in classes is much easier to concentrate on learning knowledge than at home. (Second, it is much easier to concentrate on
studying in classes than it is at home.) (2) It is not only because everybody studies together in the classroom, but also because there are too many distractions in the home environment. (This is not only because everybody studies together in class, but also because there are not as many distractions at school as there are at home.) In addition, well-established schools supply a lot of advanced equipment to
study for students. (In addition, well-established schools supply students with a lot of advanced
studying equipment.)
Third, teachers in schools may help you solve a problem themselves. (Third, teachers in schools may help you solve a problem face to face.) (“face to face”) (B) After you finish an excellent job, they will encourage you to give you confidence. (After you finish an excellent job, they will boost your confidence.) (“to boost your confidence”) (C) So it highly improves efficiency of the knowledge comprehension. (So, it highly improves the efficiency of comprehension.)
I am the sort of person who has been
studying in school for twelve years and will be continued
studying in school for five years. (I am someone who has been
studying in school for twelve years and will continue
studying for five more years.) (3) Considering the advantages of
studying in conventional schools, I would prefer to choose the latter choice.
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