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[申请成为恒星人] I'm one of your friend

I'm one of your friend

Hello everyone,my name is Ape,I'm 25years old,I have worked for more than 2 years and now I'm still working in a company.But I'm not satisfied of(这里要用什么介词?)my earnings.So I want to pick up my English in order to earn more money.Because I will get married in  Sep. I love my wife,so I hope she can have comfortable life.I hope my wish can come to be ture.Let's get(“get”对不对?) progressive together.

PS:I want to be a 恒星人。And if I have any plomble,please check them out,and tell me why.Thank you very much!

[ 本帖最后由 apeliu 于 2008-6-14 23:23 编辑 ]

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Welcome,Ape

第一个介词用 with
第二个词,用make will be better...
anyway, Nice to meet you here
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