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[原创] 各位谁来找找我的错.

各位谁来找找我的错.

Good morning evryone:
        I am glad to be there,First  let me introduce myself , My name is Zang Zhe wich is spelled Z-A-N-G
Zang and Z-H-E Zhe. I graduated from University Of South China in july 2007and studied computer science and technology there.I am open-minded,quick in thought and very found of computer
networks. In my spare time i often do some sprots with my friends and i believe that everything is possible if you work hard!

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can be understanded

but alittle weard

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Hello boys ,thanks your suggestion.

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very good!

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Let me try to rewrite your introduction ^ ^~  as follows:

Dear Friends:
        Good morning! I am glad to be here. First, let me introduce myself . My name is Zang Zhe. I graduated from South China University in July,2007. My major is Computer Science and Technology. I'm an open-minded person with active thought, and be proficient in computer networks. I enjoy playing sprots with my friends when I'm leisure. And I believe that everything is possible if you work hard!

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So good!

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yeah

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