考官问道：what kind of qualities a good leader should have?
考生回答：
观点1：A good leader should be passionate，
理由1：Because his passion will help him do well.
例子1: 例子1：In business, a passionate boss can do his business better when he likes it.
观点2： 观点2：A good leader also should be like a model.
理由2： 理由2：Because followers will all learn from their leader.
例子2： 例子2：In Business, successful leadership is mainlyabout whether his employees work as hard as their boss does.
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观点1(旧)：A good leader should be passionate.
观点1(新)：successful leaders would probably be quite passionate and enthusiastic about what they do.
成功的领导人应该很可能是非常激情和热情地对待他们所作的事情。
理由1(旧)：Because his passion will help him do well.
理由1(新)：Success comes easily when someone is obsessed with his career. He will be more relentless in the pursuit of his goals if he’s keen on his business. He will achieve his peak performance only when he’s doing the thing which interests him or something he cares about.
成功来得容易当一个人沉溺于他的职业，他会更加不停歇地追求他的目标如果他很喜欢他的生意，他将会到达顶峰表现只有当他做自己感兴趣的事情和他在意的事情。