There is no denying that, however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen, which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.
There is no denying that, however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings,这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型，还有however作为插入语，function in the disservice of替换do harm to
Emerging代替appearing ( fading代替disappearing )
Net citizen网民，属于精彩用词 As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should, therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.
No garden has no weeds替换Every coin has two sides
Computers do play，do强调
Positive替换important / good等
A slice of替换a part of
Unfavorable替换bad
Impacts替换effects / influences
We should, therefore, take advantage of…使用插入语
Fruits (而且fruits用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替换advantage ( defects替换disadvantage )
Facet替换aspect
各位同学，上面的
作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点，
作文怎么会不得高分呢!
以下是30个最经典的替换词，各位同学可以参考一下。
1.individuals,characters, folks代替(people ,persons)
2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding代替good
3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse(有害的)代替bad，如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive代替
e.g. An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation, as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.
4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,many,if not most)代替many.
注：用many, if not most一定要小心，many后一定要有词。
E.g. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理用most, if not all ,代替most.
5: a slice of, quiet a few , several代替some
6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that,hold the view that, it is widely shared that,it is universally acknowledged that)替think(因为是书面语，所以要加that)
7:affair ,business ,matter代替thing
8: shared代common
9.reap huge fruits代替get much benefit )
10:for my part ,from my own perspective代替in my opinion
11:Increasing(ly),growing代替more and more(注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.
E.g. sth has gained growing popularity.
Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.
12.little if anything,或little or nothing代替hardly
13..benefitial rewarding代替helpful be beneficial of
14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,代替customer
15.exceedingly,extremely代替very
16.hardly unnecessary, hardly inevitable ...代替necessary, inevitable
17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb代替sb take interest in
18.capture one's attention代替attract one's attention.
19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect
20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代indicate, suggest ,fear
21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger代替cause.
22. There are several reasons behind sth代替..reasons for sth
23.desire代替want.
24.pour attention into代替pay attention to
25.bear in mind that代替remember
26. enjoy, possess代替have(注意process是过程的意思)
27. interaction代替communication
28.frown on sth代替be against , disagree with sth
29.to name only a few, as an example代替for example
30. next to/virtually impossible,代替nearly impossible
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