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英语四级六级作文训练营:改词扩句(第一期)

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Others think that the utilization of waste products will be eliminated sooner or later with the emergence of hi-te . However, I did not consider that factor carefully. Because I hold the view that waste materials can be made good use of to help reduce the living cost.

原句:I did not consider that factor carefully.

改句:I fail to take that factor into careful consideration.

【讲解】

在这个简单句中,主要做了两个改变,一是把"did not"改成"fail to", 同样的意思,可是词汇应用的灵活度却大大提高。

二是把"consider…carefully"改成了"take sth into careful consideration",在考场作文中,词组的运用是个亮点,而且英语中静态居多(名词用的多),汉语中动态居多(动词用的多),在此把动词"consider"变成名词"consideration",顿时使英文更加地道。

下面请修改以下语句:

1.With the development of society, people pay more and more attention to the quality of life.

2.They live a happier life. They take part in all kinds of social activities and have more holidays.


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