学员: 老师，你好！P44完形填空23题 为什么选择with，我看不明白，请分析一下，个人认为选and。
Tn fact，it is growing so quickly that our telephone numbering system needs re-organising with some major changes will have to be made.
老师回复：Tn fact，it is growing so quickly that our telephone numbering system needs re-organising with some ajor changes will have to be made.
AND是并列关系
而此句话是说我们的电话号码系统需要再调整,而这种再调整必须有很大的变化如果用AND,则表示我们的电话号码系统需要再调整并且在.有一些很大的变化,从
英语的角度并没有说清楚...变化
学员: P36 4
Sales of adventure games increased steadily from 1995 to 1998.Sales of action games increased steadily from 1995 to 1997，peaked at 25% in 1997，and then droped sharply.Sales of sports games droped by 10% in 1996，remained steady in 1996 and 1997，but increased by 5% in 1998.Sales of other games remained steady in 1995 and 1996 before a slight drop in 1997，and then recovered in 1998.
老师回复：Sales of adventure games increased steadily from 1995 to 1998.Sales of action games increased steadily from 1995 to 1997应该用不同的词来表述GO UP，peaked at 25% in 1997，and then droped sharply.Sales of sports games droped by 10% in 1996，remained steady in 1996 and 1997，but increased by 5% in 1998.Sales of other games remained steady in 1995 and 1996 before a slight drop in 1997，and then recovered in 1998.
表达很清楚,非常不错不足之处是应该用不同的上升和下降的
词汇表达一个
词汇用几遍显得很罗嗦,建议改正。
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